The Writer's Forums - Horror Critique

Everyone who posts in here will appreciate your comments. You don't have to be an expert to comment, just give an honest impression of the work and suggestions for improvement.
If you would like help learning to critique, please check the Critique and Comment Guidelines

A good rule of thumb is to: Critique/Comment on three stories for every one you post.

Please keep the following in mind:
If you critique and take time to learn how to do it effectively, an added bonus will be learning more about your own work.

Suggestions before posting your work:
First drafts (except for Flash Fiction) should not be put up for critique/comment as it takes too much time to sort through poor punctuation, spelling, structure, etc. The exception is a first draft that has a specific problem the writer needs help with. Please do not post off-site links for critique.

Photographs, animations, illustrations and/or gifs are not allowed on the forums and will be deleted without comment. The best solution is to put them on your web page and post a link you your Link Line